Before you can do good, you first must write well
Just think about what it must be like to be a program officer at a large foundation. Every day, the mail and email bring new proposals to be considered, most from very worthy and qualified nonprofits. Each must be read through and digested to decide if the foundation should consider them or not.
Now think what’s it’s like to open one of those proposals and encounter bad grammar, stilted use of language, jargon, and catch phrases. My guess is that that proposal moves to the bottom of the pile.
Now imagine opening a proposal written in a conversational tone. It feels like someone from the nonprofit is right there explaining to you what they do and why they deserve funding. The proposal doesn’t try to impress you with highbrow language, but rather with the quality of work done by the nonprofit. Top of the pile for this one!
On my web site, you can read more about writing well in "Writing a Proposal They Will Want to Read."
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